Health Professions Admissions

For dental, medical, and health professions applicants.

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Health Professions Admissions (Dental, medical, PA, nursing, etc.)

Step 1: 30-Minute Consultation

A short call to understand where you are: your school list, what's drafted, what's due first.

Step 2: The Package

The Draft Edit: For students with a personal statement draft

         Three rounds, each with a job:

  • Round One –– Structure. We rebuild how the essay moves: what it opens on, what it withholds, where it turns, and what it earns by the end.
  • Round Two — Story. Creative writing techniques applied to your essay: scenes instead of summaries, specific details instead of general claims, and a shape that keeps a reader reading.
  • Round Three — Voice. Line by line, until it sounds like you at your sharpest. Clear enough to read once, distinct enough to remember.

         Every round includes:

  • A live 1-on-1 Zoom session, working through the draft together
  • Section-level rewrites wherever a paragraph is working against you
  • Written commentary on every change, so you leave understanding why

The Statement Edit: For students starting their personal statement from a blank page

  • An eight-step extraction process. Structured questioning built to surface material you'd never think of, because you don't think it's relevant. It works on applicants convinced they have nothing to write about, and it ends with a topic no one else in the pile has.
  • Connecting your field to the rest of your life. The strongest statements don't start in a clinic. They start somewhere else, a job or a hobby or something you're unreasonably particular about, and arrive at your field as a conclusion the reader reaches with you.
  • A detailed outline before you write a sentence. You'll know what the statement opens on, which experiences go where, where the turn toward your field happens, and what the last line has to earn. Every structural decision is made before you draft, which is why first drafts come out closer to finished than applicants expect.
  • Support through the blank page, the part nobody helps with. You write at your own pace, but not alone.
  • Everything in The Draft Edit.

The Application Edit: For students who want their dream schools done right.

  • Your Experiences section, up to 20 entries. Most applicants describe what a role was. We work out what you actually did in it and what it showed, then shape each description to earn its space. Twenty entries is a lot of writing, and it's usually done wrong.
  • Secondary essays for up to 3 schools, each built on what that program values and the case for you specifically.
  • Program-specific research. Faculty, clinics, patient populations, community outreach, and my notes on what has landed at that school before.
  • A complete application review before you submit. Small errors in the sections nobody thinks about are the ones that quietly cost you.
  • Direct access between sessions. Most consultancies route you through a coordinator. You'll have me.
  • Everything in The Statement Edit.

The Admit Edit: For students who want every advantage, on every application, until the last decision.

  • Unlimited secondaries and your complete Experiences section. No cap on how many schools you apply to or how many entries we work through. Secondaries arrive fast and all at once, and the applications that suffer are usually the last few, written when you're out of energy. This tier exists so that doesn't happen.
  • Letter of evaluation support. Your writers want to help you, but most are writing several letters and will default to summarizing your transcript. I work out which specific moments to give each of them, so their letters add evidence rather than repeat what the committee already has.
  • Full interview preparation. Traditional, panel, and MMI formats. We go through the questions you'll actually be asked, work on how you answer them, and run mock interviews so you're comfortable rather than rehearsed.
  • Support if you're waitlisted or reapplying. Letters of intent, updated personal statements, and an honest assessment of what to change.
  • Direct access to me, throughout the cycle, for anything.
  • Everything in The Application Edit.

Step 3: What's Next

Decisions come in, and we get back on a call to talk through your offers.